micro review feed back needed

I have been working on some advice i was given here from some other players if you could can you guys give me feedback on some of my plays and let me know if this is correct for micro andwhat things you see I should be working on. I have struggled online and have a tendecy to play like i am at a live game. My user id is bigstock Thanks

Hand #1587011940001077: Rome 11940
Seat 1: Deec*** (7.41 in chips)
Seat 2: Lake*** (3.90 in chips)
Seat 3: mmm*** (9.48 in chips)
Seat 4: bigstock (0.94 in chips)
Seat 6: natu*** (4.48 in chips)
Seat 7: joki*** (4.84 in chips)
Seat 8: Ches*** (8.80 in chips)
Seat 9: xiao*** (2.46 in chips)
Seat 10: $BAL*** (0.72 in chips)
natu***: posts small blind $0.02
joki***: posts big blind $0.04
Dealt to bigstock [ Qd Qh ]
Ches***: folds
xiao***: folds
$BAL***: folds
Deec***: calls
Lake***: calls
mmm***: calls
bigstock: raises to $0.16
natu***: calls
joki***: folds
Deec***: calls
Lake***: folds
mmm***: raises to $0.52
bigstock: calls
natu***: calls
Deec***: calls
@@@ F_L_O_P @@@ [ 7d 3c 8h ]
natu***: is all in 3.9600
Deec***: calls
mmm***: folds
bigstock: is all in 0.4200
Deec***: shows Ts As
bigstock: shows Qd Qh
natu***: shows 8d 6h
# # # TURN # # # [ 9h ]
&&& RIVER &&& [ 2s ]
*** SHOW DOWN ***
natu*** wins $6.74 with Pair of Eights
*** SHOW DOWN ***
bigstock wins $3.26 with Pair of Queens


Hand #1587011940001085: Rome 11940
Seat 1: Deec*** (1.98 in chips)
Seat 2: Lake*** (3.52 in chips)
Seat 3: mmm*** (8.74 in chips)
Seat 4: bigstock (3.18 in chips)
Seat 5: juan*** (0.50 in chips)
Seat 6: natu*** (11.27 in chips)
Seat 7: joki*** (0.86 in chips)
Seat 8: Ches*** (8.68 in chips)
Seat 9: xiao*** (4.99 in chips)
Seat 10: dadd*** (2.36 in chips)
bigstock: posts small blind $0.02
juan***: posts big blind $0.04
Dealt to bigstock [ Ac Qs ]
natu***: folds
joki***: calls
Ches***: folds
xiao***: folds
dadd***: calls
Deec***: calls
Lake***: folds
mmm***: folds
bigstock: calls
juan***: raises to $0.08
joki***: calls
dadd***: calls
Deec***: calls
bigstock: calls
@@@ F_L_O_P @@@ [ 8c 2d Ah ]
bigstock: bets $0.20
juan***: folds
joki***: folds
dadd***: folds
Deec***: calls
# # # TURN # # # [ 3h ]
bigstock: bets $0.35
Deec***: calls
&&& RIVER &&& [ Tc ]
bigstock: bets $0.44
Deec***: calls
*** SHOW DOWN ***
bigstock: shows [ Ac Qs ] (Pair of Aces )
Deec***: shows [ 3c 8h ] (Two Pairs, Eights and Threes )
Deec*** wins $2.29 with Two Pairs, Eights and Threes

Hand #1587011940001107: Rome 11940
Seat 2: [Clr*** (5.23 in chips)
Seat 3: mmm*** (11.38 in chips)
Seat 4: bigstock (1.93 in chips)
Seat 5: juan*** (1.16 in chips)
Seat 6: natu*** (11.65 in chips)
Seat 7: joki*** (1.54 in chips)
Seat 8: Ches*** (8.46 in chips)
Seat 9: xiao*** (7.64 in chips)
Seat 10: Ding*** (2.34 in chips)
joki***: posts small blind $0.02
Ches***: posts big blind $0.04
Dealt to bigstock [ 9s 9d ]
xiao***: folds
Ding***: folds
[Clr***: calls
mmm***: folds
bigstock: raises to $0.12
juan***: raises to $0.26
natu***: folds
joki***: folds
Ches***: folds
[Clr***: folds
bigstock: calls
@@@ F_L_O_P @@@ [ 4d Th 2d ]
bigstock: bets $0.34
juan***: raises to $0.68
bigstock: calls
# # # TURN # # # [ Td ]
bigstock: bets $0.34
juan***: is all in 0.2200
bigstock: returns uncalled bet $0.12
bigstock: shows 9s 9d
juan***: shows Jd As
&&& RIVER &&& [ 5d ]
*** SHOW DOWN ***
juan*** wins $2.32 with Flush, Jack high

Hand 1: fine, you should probably shove all in preflop with your stack, btw why are you shortctacked?

Hand 2: with so many limpers I'd 3bet preflop and fold to a 4bet, then on that flop be willing to get it in, but with all the limpers I'd play much more passively postflop, bet the flop, c/c turn and b/f river or sth along those lines

Hand 3: either shove or fold on flop, if you feel he has you beat fold, if you feel you got him, shove

Thanks for you advice On first hand i only bought in for 1.00 that is the deal on the stack. thanks again